Rain On Monday
(Chorus is in bold, Bridge in italics)
The skies
are dark and I’m swept away
Under the
thumb on some distant day
Take my
bruises, come through the pain
Find my
hope come back to life again
And I feel it’s gonna rain, on
Monday
But I won’t feel blue, coz I’ll make
it through
Feel it’s gonna change, so I’m
smiling
Coz the skies will clear again
I place the
pieces and make them fit
Took so
long to make sense of it
Spread my
wings and I fly away
Leave my
troubles to yesterday
Times are hard, but I just keep on
smiling, just smiling
Times are hard, but I know I’ll make
it through
Times are hard, but I just keep on
fighting
Times are hard, but I let them slip
right through (you know it’s up to you)
Feel the
silence deserting me
I don’t
need any one to rescue me
Watch as
shadows are torn apart
Feel the
music inside my heart
18 comments:
I love that highlighted stanza myself!...
JJRod'z
JJ - thanks for the visit - i always think the (you know its up to you) is a bit Bryan Adams, but what's wrong with that?? :)
hopeful with joy...very nice
Lovely and lyrical...this one is begging for music!
Definitely needs music to go with the words...
Quick, find a musician to pen the music for your wonderful words.
Ooh, now this seems familiar. i think I could almost hear a tune for it too. Hmm, Dm Am G F...
Sounds like a song to me!
=)
Oh wow, this is great. Do you have the tune to go with it? I hope you post and let us know when you do!
Oh, that was wonderful. Do you have a tune in mind? I'd love to sing this, or hear it, it's really fantastic.
Thanks to everyone who asked about a tune - yes it does have one and it's on my list of "to do" for recording in the near future - so will try and visit y'all and let you know when its up
It's unusually happy for me this one - full of hope :)
I love it! And I'm ready for the song NOW. Get with it. Heh.
Sings all the way through.
Go with that music, baby :)
No doubt the music is written too?
thanks all - am working on it.
A song for a Magpie prompt! I love it. Not sure if anyone else has thought of this....
Now, share the tune with us? Then the picture would really come to life, I think. :)
Lyrically lovely! Argent's chords work really well actually. I'd chuck in an Fm and finish on a C......lol
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