Ok so it's been a while since I travelled on the Poetry Bus and I hope I haven't missed my ride as The Bug posted very early and a lot of people have already posted as a result
Anyway - Bug asked us to submit on one of three topics - and I chose the one related to conversations with God.
I offer you the below in good humour - please do not take offense:
Get This Party Started
At the end of the world disco party
The crowd splits to two different rooms
The believers in one quietly praying
Whilst Satan keeps all the best tunes
With the Judgement day finally over
They wait for the main star to appear
From the back of his private stretch limo
And finally make his plan clear
The lights dim, the music starts playing
The smoke machine belches a haze
And in white suit and medallion God enters
Still moving in mysterious ways
19 comments:
It's not done! What's the plan? Argghh!
LOL - I enjoyed this a lot. I've got you linked.
Great fun. Take offence? Nobody should. And anyway, to be satirised is a compliment.
I should have kept my platform shoes, dang it. Things I want to know:
Does he have the really good tunes?
Are his shoes white?
What happens to Satan?
Do we all get to dance?
Your final line rolled me off of my chair.
Bug - i think we have to wait for that bit
Dominic - thanks
Enchanted - i'm not sure: i think there's some mention of The Lord Of The Dance...
this is great.. love the image of god in a mahoosive pair of flares and sparkly platforms :-D
he da man!
Oh absolutely brilliant. Let's hope this it how it is!
There's going to be dancing? Aargh, I'm hopeless at that. Nice idea though!
Brilliant! And the quiet pauses come between the dancing - best of both worlds! LOL :)
Let's get this party started!
(I want more of this too)
no offense - loved it actually, especially liked
Satan keeps all the best tunes
and God [s]till moving in mysterious ways...
what else is new on both counts? :)
I may be quietly praying, but my toes will be tapping to those devilish tunes! Mysterious ending!
Ha ha! I likes it! Mysterious but in this case marvelous!
What else would he, oops! HE be wearing?
watercats - well someone had to invent disco
Peter - just as long as there's no Dexy's Midnight Runners (yeesh)
Argent - yeah, but there'll be a live band: so we'll be sorted :)
Jinksy - ta
Helen - absolutely
Gospelwriter - thanks. The song remains the same as they say :)
Museswings - keep on rocking in the free world
TfE - ta
English - absolutely!
Great. Got me seeing visions of Elvis (and others) in the role of the Big Man Upstairs.
Lead me to the disco!
So, what happens next?
I sincerely hope there'll be a follow-on, second act, no. 2 in the series, or what you will.
Doctor FTSE - is a comment about the KING of heaven going too far? Hmmm...
Cad - the best
Friko - sadly i don't have the answers to what happens next.
You really are so funny!
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