tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post7471498851105172646..comments2023-12-01T04:51:31.087-08:00Comments on Don't Feed The Pixies: TFE's Monday PoemDon't Feed The Pixieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05380146661526476947noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-50507851019603977242010-03-01T13:50:39.174-08:002010-03-01T13:50:39.174-08:00God, I'm stalking Peter about at the moment an...God, I'm stalking Peter about at the moment and he is saying everything I want to say.<br /><br />I really loved this, it's quirky and yet bleak and yet funny and yet tragic and it just really worked for me!Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-72069357355768235712010-03-01T13:34:57.997-08:002010-03-01T13:34:57.997-08:00Interesting idea and it works really well.Interesting idea and it works really well.Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-20340414209350998452010-03-01T13:22:06.740-08:002010-03-01T13:22:06.740-08:00all - thank you for visiting.
The idea just sta...all - thank you for visiting. <br /><br />The idea just started out as what would happen if the words at the end of the sentence could almost fit anywhere else in the poem and developed along those lines. It ended up a bit grimmer, probably due to all those endless bus journeys, but i went for a hopeful ending<br /><br />The cat is fine btw and much lovedDon't Feed The Pixieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05380146661526476947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-64509686253662658392010-03-01T11:22:00.945-08:002010-03-01T11:22:00.945-08:00Kinda like Ground Hog's Day.Kinda like Ground Hog's Day.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-23778353417671561292010-03-01T09:28:08.288-08:002010-03-01T09:28:08.288-08:00I liked the inversions and I'm partial to the ...I liked the inversions and I'm partial to the cat bits.Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-70474897876795373462010-03-01T08:03:29.216-08:002010-03-01T08:03:29.216-08:00ohmygosh, this is a very scary poem.
What happened...ohmygosh, this is a very scary poem.<br />What happened to the cat?!<br />Please tell me the cat is ok. <br />You see, it is all too very effective! Excellent work.NanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-65017785527622045012010-03-01T06:47:41.994-08:002010-03-01T06:47:41.994-08:00That's great. I may have to steal the idea...a...That's great. I may have to steal the idea...a bit like Wendy Cope<br />I am a poet. <br />I am very find of bananas<br />I am bananas<br />I am very fond of a poetEmerging Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06539530495238043923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-30452574253610346182010-03-01T05:55:10.607-08:002010-03-01T05:55:10.607-08:00I seriously like this lots!... and I know this fee...I seriously like this lots!... and I know this feeling sooo well.. apart from the feeding cat thing.. i don't have a cat. You write with such an englishness! You're like a strange living incarnation of the british suburbs... hope you don't take that as a terrible thing, it's meant as a compliment :-) There is so much character, good, bad, weird, lost, etc.. just great!Batteson.Indhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10846214578565824955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-54548141705033858652010-03-01T02:28:45.375-08:002010-03-01T02:28:45.375-08:00...and then do it over and over and over! I like!...and then do it over and over and over! I like!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-87030016407180921062010-03-01T02:04:36.652-08:002010-03-01T02:04:36.652-08:00I really like it, all of the verses work for me.I really like it, all of the verses work for me.Moirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03248425760199196965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-74847241809984704312010-03-01T00:21:18.374-08:002010-03-01T00:21:18.374-08:00You do monotony very well!
xYou do monotony very well!<br />xRachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-33179086503156676972010-02-28T13:59:14.168-08:002010-02-28T13:59:14.168-08:00I like the changing around of the ideas in each su...I like the changing around of the ideas in each successive verse. I've got a couple of permanently empy cats here - so they they tell me.Argenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10532506690426639326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2094379750831310333.post-44352681135466927262010-02-28T13:01:19.461-08:002010-02-28T13:01:19.461-08:00Quirky, different, I likes it!Quirky, different, I likes it!Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.com